Just a Defense Against the Dark Arts Professor

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1. well this one is a readable work. not that bad, not that good. like any book, you can nitpick and find holes here and there. i did not read any of the original hp books. and probably just watched two of the movies when i saw it showing in one of the tv channels decades ago. my most exposure to hp is probably in fanfics like this so i cannot tell how much reasonable this fic is from the original. i guess my main issue with the hp fanfics i have read is how few the used spells are. i think there are just about 10 here. and also how the mc does not create new spells. one i have always wanted to know is why the mc here did not even create a spell to counter anti-(dis)apparition field. or learn from the magic of the elves. there is just no creativity (regarding creating spells), here or in the other fanfics i have tried. another thing that has bothered me so much is how sane voldemort still is after splitting his soul a lot of times, and constantly use black magic. by the logic of how the magic in hp world works, it seems to not make sense. but by logic of a fiction, well, it makes a lot of sense. lol. i just remembered...after all this time, i only found out dumbledore and grindelwald were gay was when i was reading another fic (hogwarts shippuden) just before this. i had to google it to see if that was in the original. lol. anyway, goign back to this fic, i think the ending could have used more words. like describe how everything settled down. and how things were like years later. it just felt lacking with how the author ended this.

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2. it was fun. loved reading it. thanks

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3. Esta novela es toda contradictoria y el prota por su actitud no parece que tuviera la mentalidad de un adulto. Él dice que solo vio el primer libro de Harry Potter pero cuando empiezan los problemas con la camara secreta, dice saber que la trama se desvio del original.... entonces digo yo como sabe eso? no dijo que lo unico que recordaba era "la camara secreta" y que habia "un basilisco" ???, eso no tiene sentido alguno, no tiene ni idea del diario ni del desarrollo de segundo año pero aun puede decir que la trama se desvio jajajaj

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4. Aquí hay algo que me tiene pensativo.. En su vida pasada era un hombre llamado Charlotte? O era una mujer que ahora reencarno en el cuerpo de un hombre? :P entonces en esta vida con los recuerdos de su vida pasada va ser gay? o era una mujer lesbiana en su vida pasada y ahora siendo hombre no tendra ningún problema? jajajaja

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5. Amazing fan fiction.... A bit slow at certain times, but what I really like even more is that it's true to the source material Lore, But it also creates its own branching story line that does not break established lore and/or character profiles and reader immersion!........................................................................ I can confidently say this is one of the top HP fanfics out there

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